| Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) | |
|
+4cornelia's #1 fan ♥hay lin♥ *~Dark Crystal Queen~* *//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL 8 posters |
Author | Message |
---|
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Sun 22 Mar 2009, 09:01 | |
| Glomix episode 1 Season 1 "Just a Dream Away...." Original script
This is Melina,s house.A lighting storm is taking place.
Melina:(Speaking in dreams)NO!,j-just let me goooo!I don't know what you're talking about.NO!,NO!,Please let him go! Mother:Mel? Melina:AAAAAH!(wakes up with her face wet because of her tears) Mother:Honey!Are you Ok? Melina:Yes, i think. Mother:Do you had a nightmare? Melina:Y-yes.But is was JUST a dream!(throws her pillow to the window, where a picture of her crush was pasted.) Mother:Calm down young lady.Now go to bed.Tomorrow you have school. Melina:Sure!Good night mom.
Big Valley High School.A group of girls are walking down the hall.
Valerie:Argh!Please stop eating Aly! Aly:Why? Valerie:Because your stressing my human nerves. Aly:V, actually you dont... Valerie:SHUT UP!Pauline is comig.Keep it cool please. Pauline:Hey ladies?What's up? Aly:Same as always Pauline. Pauline:Have you guys seen Lauren around here? Valerie:No....But wait!There she is! Lauren:(Surrounded with guys)Yeah boys, i have a loot of free time to date each one of you.Hey girls!!!! Aly:Come here Lauren! Lauren:Uff!Sorry, these are my new admirers Aly:Dumby Lauren:Lol! Melina:(Running to get to class)Hey guys! Valerie:At least you came Mel! Melina:Sorry, i had a nightmare. Valerie:Why don't you guys get to class?.I need to talk to Melina. Pauline:mmmmmm....Deal. Valerie:Thanks! Melina:What is going on V? Valerie:There's something about us.....that you need to understand. Melina:US????? Valerie:Yeah...Something like that... Melina:What is it? Valerie:Im.....Im not like every girl around here.... Melina:So.... Valerie:Aly and me have a secret Melina:Tell me Valerie:Well.....
BY:*//ROCK-N-ROLL GIRL\\* | |
|
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Sun 22 Mar 2009, 20:32 | |
| Glomix episode 1 Season 1 "Just a Dream Away...." Original Script Continued
Valerie:Mel, youre one of my biggest friends in all the world....And i thought it was time to tell you the truth... Melina:Val,just tell me Valerie:Im.....im a Ninfe Melina:That youre a WHAT???? Valerie:A ninfe,and im breaking all the rules by telling you this. Melina:What the heck... Valerie:Please understand me Mel Melina:Y-you are TOTALLY insane!!! Valerie:No,im not insane, im telling you the truth. Melina:Ok.....let's supose youre serious and I believe you....What is a Ninfe? Valerie:The ninfes are the ancient guardians of Lovea's portal of surrender. Melina:Ok....So???? Valerie:Lovea is a place far away from earth,and i should live there. Melina:Im....Im not sure if Im prepared for the weird revelations hour. Valerie:I keep a big power(She shows Mel a necklace) Melina:Really??? Valerie:Im....Im so sorry.... Melina:Dont..Aggh!V,i just don't know what to say.Suddenly everyone has a mystique power and I don't have any!!!!! Valerie:Actually.... Melina:NO!!!!Please dont say anything more.I've heard too much today. Valerie:I hope you understand Melina:I do....but what's that thing in the sky?
The girls turn backwards and see a big lighting bolt felling from the sky
Valerie:OMG!!!! Melina:What's going on???? Valerie:Time for action.Go away Mel!!!!!!!!!!! Melina:(Runs as much as she cans, but the bolt changes direction and aproachs to Mel) Valerie:No!!!!(Tries to get to Mel,but falls) Melina:No!This is just like my dream!I....I need to go!! ?????:No!!!! Melina:What the heck.... ?????:(Gets Melina out of the bolts direction)Are you Ok? Melina:I...I think I am. ?????:Good. Melina:Wait!Who are you?(Turns around, but the guy dissapears.) Valerie:(Incouscent) Melina:The bolt!Somebody help!!!!!!!! Melina:(Ties her hands and concentrates)H-E-L-P Melina:(Suddenly,she feels her hands burned)What is going on?????? ?????:Use your powers!!!! Melina:Where are you? ?????:Dont look for me, just defeat yourself! Melina:But what am I supposed to do? ?????:Just say "NIRVELARXINOSUSES" Melina:Nirvelawhat??????? Melina:Oh,whatever(Puts her hands in an attack position)FIRE!!!!! ?????:Nothing's happening. Melina:No,no,NO!Im just about to die and I cant defeat myself????That is SO not going to happen!!!!
Suddenly Melina makes an invisible vibration and starts to move her hands in the air.
Melina:DESTROY THE BOLT!!!!!(Makes a big plasma ball and launches it to the bolt) Valerie:(Waking up)What is going.....WOW! Melina:(Keeps her look in the big bolt)AAAAAARGH! JUST GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Melina:(Her body glows white and the bolt dissapears) Valerie:Go Melina! Melina:Wowowow....What Ive just did??????? Valerie:Something TOTALLY awesome! ?????:(Whispers)Oh Melina.Youre the chosen one, youre my heart....(Dissapears) Melina:Im........(Falls asleep) Valerie:Mel!
Valerie takes Melina to the school's nurse office
BY:*//ROCK-N-ROLL GIRL\\* | |
|
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Tue 24 Mar 2009, 14:22 | |
| | |
|
| |
*~Dark Crystal Queen~* Moderator
Posts : 827 Join date : 2009-02-15 Age : 27 Location : ~Florida~
RPG Character Info Character Name: Evangeline Crystale
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Thu 02 Apr 2009, 09:10 | |
| | |
|
| |
♥hay lin♥
Posts : 298 Join date : 2009-03-05 Age : 30 Location : Philippines
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Fri 03 Apr 2009, 08:15 | |
| | |
|
| |
cornelia's #1 fan Moderator
Posts : 219 Join date : 2009-04-03 Age : 29 Location : Costa Rica
RPG Character Info Character Name:
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Thu 09 Apr 2009, 22:45 | |
| Cooooool | |
|
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Sun 19 Apr 2009, 08:57 | |
| Glomix episode 1 Season 1 "Just a Dream Away...." Original Script Continued
Melina's Dream
????:Melina! Welcome to your mind! Melina:Call me Mel! I totally hate my name! ????:Probably because that's NOT your name! Melina:Who are you??? James:Im James, and, Oh! Im forgetting something! Melina:What? James:This!
Hits Melina with a sword
Melina:AAAA! (Starts bleeding and touches her heart) James:W-what the h-heck! (Bleeds just like Melina) Melina:Aaaa...(Her voice turns off and falls dead) James:Helene! Help me! (James dissapears and leaves the sword) Aly:NOOOO!!!!! Pauline:I told you guys! Lauren:OMG! Her outfit is a mess!!!! Aly:V!!! Lauren:You can't call Valerie just like that! You have to concentrate and....(Gets her hands to her head) Pauline:You must concentrate Lauren! Lauren:Valerie,Valerie,We got to save Mel!.She's dying right now in her mind! She won't woke up! Valerie:(mind talking)Got it!.But,why don't you ask Pauline??? Lauren:(mind talking)Wait a sec! Pauline!!!! Pauline:What? Lauren:Do something! Pauline:I'll try (puts her hands in Melina's head) Mmmm....
Pauline looks into Melina's memories and sees a sword and a man.
Aly:What? Pauline:She was hit by a sword! Aly:Who did it? Pauline:I don't know! Whoever did it is a blind point for me. Aly:But will she be ok? Pauline:Im not sure,but probably.....Wait! She will be ok! Lauren:Then i'll get you ladies outta here! Aly:Wait! We could hurt Mel! Pauline:Then use your powers Aly! Aly:Ok! (Moves the place with an earthquake) Lauren! Lauren:Mindless fear! (They dissapear)
They appear in the Park
BY:*//ROCK-N-ROLL GIRL\\* | |
|
| |
*~Dark Crystal Queen~* Moderator
Posts : 827 Join date : 2009-02-15 Age : 27 Location : ~Florida~
RPG Character Info Character Name: Evangeline Crystale
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Sun 19 Apr 2009, 15:40 | |
| | |
|
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Sun 19 Apr 2009, 18:46 | |
| Thanx! More!Glomix episode 1 Season 1 "Just a Dream Away...." Original Script Continued
The Park
Melina:(waking up) What happened? Valerie:Welcome Mel! Melina:Whoa! Where are we? Valerie:Safe,back in Big Valley. Melina:Wow...I cant beleive Im alive! Lauren:You gotta check your new outfit.It's just an ilusion,but is very cool Pauline:Ommnesence,Regreting,Living,Lifting,RUSH!(gets in a position just like making yoga)
An energy wind rushes through the park
Aly:Relax Paulie,relax and let it go.Water!! (Makes a water tornado) Pauline:OMG!Omnessence!(Makes a small shield) Aly:Take this! (Launches the tornado) Pauline:Omnessence! (Tries to stop the tornado,but fails) Aly:Ha! Take that! Melina:What are they doing? Valerie:They're special,just like us.Pauline holds the physic power called omnesscence and Aly controls the elements. Melina:Then what does Lauren does? Valerie:Watch it
They both turn and see Lauren standing and moving her hands
Lauren:Mmmmm....Ahhhh! (stops the tornado and moves it into Valerie's direction) Pauline:Thanks Lau! Valerie:Hold it there (Launches powder and rushes to Melina with the tornado) Melina:Hey! (launches a big plasma blast) Valerie:Wow! (falls and the tornado gets destroyed) Melina:Let me rest,I need to reflex Lauren:Go ahead! Let's finish this Aly! (levitates a rock with her mind) Pauline:Bring it! (launches a energy wind vibration) Valerie:Yeah! Let's fight Aly:Count me in!
They start fighting and Mel rest far from them
Mel:(thoughts) Well, this day is ending,and Ive heard good enough for today...Maybe,all this reality is just a dream away..... EPISODE ENDSThis episode's ending pic:Melina's dream away.... | |
|
| |
Irma's #1 Fan
Posts : 505 Join date : 2009-02-16 Age : 28 Location : Florida
RPG Character Info Character Name: Drake Spartan
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Thu 23 Apr 2009, 11:37 | |
| | |
|
| |
xXOrubeXx
Posts : 251 Join date : 2009-03-22
RPG Character Info Character Name:
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Tue 05 May 2009, 09:52 | |
| - Irma's #1 Fan wrote:
- Nice ending picture
I agree!!! I like it! Did you make it into a real comic or is it just a script?? | |
|
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| |
| |
Supercutie12
Posts : 602 Join date : 2009-02-16 Age : 27 Location : Florida
RPG Character Info Character Name: Christina Rhinestone
| |
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Wed 06 May 2009, 16:13 | |
| | |
|
| |
*~Dark Crystal Queen~* Moderator
Posts : 827 Join date : 2009-02-15 Age : 27 Location : ~Florida~
RPG Character Info Character Name: Evangeline Crystale
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Wed 06 May 2009, 18:26 | |
| Can't wait to read the next episode! | |
|
| |
xXOrubeXx
Posts : 251 Join date : 2009-03-22
RPG Character Info Character Name:
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Thu 07 May 2009, 05:20 | |
| | |
|
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Sun 24 May 2009, 12:39 | |
| Glomix episode 2 Season 1 "A beatiful secret" Original ScriptIntro picFaithville's Park.It's a cloudy day,and Aly is taking her dog for a walk
Aly:C'mon Monty! We already have 10 minutes to walk before the rain appears! Monty:Guau gua guau! (I don't wanna get wet) Aly: I know,I know, you want a beatiful female puppy! But there isn't any at this park! Monty:Guau guau? (What are you talking about?) Aly:Monty! I want a beatiful prince too,but how about a few more minutes to walk? Monty:Guau guau! Roorf....guau guau.... (What??? Oh...never mind...) Aly:Thats the spirit!
Aly continues walking,and Monty is listening to her, bored
A limo appears outta nowhere. Some people is talking inside
Nathan:Steal her energy? Are you insane? Kathrina:Yes, it's an order Nathan.Or are you ready to end up like James? Nathan:But he is...... Kathrina:At the darkness dimmension, getting ready to battle while his heart is being repaired. Nathan:Ok. But how am I supposed to know who is that girl??? Kathrina:Easy:When you get close to her,you will fell the elements surrounding her. Nathan:And how can I steal her energy? Kathrina:It's very hard:You will have to make a combination of physical and emotional contact.If you touch her,and at the same time you make her feel something powerful, then her energy will be slowly drained. Nathan:Perfect. I'll do what I can. Kathrina:Remember: This is ONLY a game.Don't get really involucrated with her please. Nathan:I get it.Bye Kathrina!
Nathan gets to the park,and seeks a girl walking with her dog
Nathan:The elements!That is the girl!Hey you! Aly:(Turns her head)Huh? Whoa....Nathan? Nathan:.....Aly? Is that you? Aly:I can't believe it! Youre back! Nathan:That's what it seems! Aly:(Hugs Nathan)Oh Nathan! I missed you a lot since you moved to Menfire! Nathan:I missed you too(Hugs back Aly)
END OF PART 1What do u think guys? | |
|
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Sun 24 May 2009, 15:42 | |
| Glomix episode 2 Season 1 "A beatiful secret" Original Script Continued
Aly:Tell me evrything Nathan! How did you got here? Nathan:Well....My aunt brought me here.... Aly:Why? Nathan:I....I wanted to see you again... Aly:(blushes)...Thanks... Nathan:So...How are you? Aly:Im fine.Im still at Big Valley studying. Nathan:How's....You know...Our... Aly:Our field? I take care of it everyday.It makes me remember you. Nathan:Aly.... Aly:Yes? Nathan:I...Ive gotta go...Sorry... Aly:Oh...Ok! See you soon Nathan!Do you still have your cell? Nathan:Yes... Aly:Then call me later.Bye!
Nathan runs away,while he thinks...
Nathan:(thoghts)ALY???That can't be.The elemental keeper can't be her...There was sometime in fell in love with her...I could never forget her...Never...It's amazing..If Aly fells in love with me....Is her ticket to death....
Nathan keeps running away.Aly is standing in the park...
Aly:(thoughts)Why? Did I did something wrong Nathan? I am annoying? Please tell me! I can't forget you...And the day you left...
FLASHBACK
Nathan:Im sorry Aly...My parents want to move to Menfire.... Aly:....What??? Natham:Im sorry... Aly:(cries)No Nathan, you can't go and leave me here! Nathan:(passes his hand over her cheek)I just got to.... Aly:(keeps crying)I....I just can't be without you! Nathan:(Hugs her) Goodbye Aly! Aly:(Grabs his head)But before....Let me... Nathan(Moves his head)I can't Aly....Goodbye!(Runs away) Aly:Nathan!!!!(cries and leaves)
END OF THE FLASHBACK
Aly:(thoughts)That day was the wrost of my entire life....To discover that you were going to dissapear from my life in just one second...Then I thought that I could remember you if I kissed you...But you didn't want to...Why??? Probably cus you didn't love me as much as I loved you Nathan...
Aly leaves the park,walking in the rain,and she founds Valerie in the way...
Valerie:Aly! Are you crying or it's just the rain? Aly:Im fine...But it's Nathan! He's back.... Valerie:Nathan??? He lefted years ago! Aly:I know,but he found me in the park... Valerie:And then? Did he kissed you or something? Aly:(explodes-literaly-and cries)No!!He just lefted....I..I can't... Valerie:Let's go! Please don't cry!
The girls leave | |
|
| |
*//ROCK -N- ROLL GIRL
Posts : 714 Join date : 2009-03-07 Age : 30 Location : Mexico
RPG Character Info Character Name: Bella Hills
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Wed 27 May 2009, 14:11 | |
| Glomix episode 2 Season 1 "A beatiful secret" Original Script Continued
Joe's Pizza
Melina:Hahahaha! Nice joke Lauren! Lauren:Im not joking! Ive actually got a a role as a top model! Pauline:Hehehehe!Look!Valerie and Aly!Hey ladies! Valerie:What's up girls? Melina:Hi Aly! Aly:Hi Mel.... Melina:What's with your mod? Lauren:Yeah,you look like if your ex has returned and.... Aly:(cries again and leaves) Pauline:Nice Lauren! Melina:Lauren!What's in your head! Lauren:Hey cut it off!I didn't mean to,and you know that! Valerie:It's ok,you didn't knew Lau...It's Nathan,he's back.... Melina:Oh no....Now I get it... Valerie:Yeah...Anyway,something strange is happening... Pauline:What? Valerie:Im sensing a dark force around Aly... Lauren:But she is the keeper of the elements...I mean,she's a light! Valerie:I know,but that energy doens't comes from her... Melina:...So? Valerie:Nathan.That's the only answer I can give to you. Pauline:If youre right,then Nathan didn't move to Menfire... Valerie:Exacly,he dissapeared and went to another dimmension. Lauren:And he attemped to kill Melina. Pauline:No...The essecence of Melina's mind is different to Nathan's. Melina:Hey!Im already new at this magical-weirdness thing! Lauren:You will get it later. Valerie:Then,Aly is in danger...The only thing left is find out Nathan's power.Pauline, try to sense it. Pauline:I will.Omnessecence!...(Looks images in her mind)....OH NO! Melina:What???What did you see??? Pauline:He is...one of the soul eaters... Lauren:That's it!Let's go to Aly's place!
The girls leave...
Aly's home
Aly:(crying)Nathan.... Nathan:(appears infront of her)Hi Aly Aly:Nathan!(runs to him and launches herself to his arms) Nathan:I have to tell you something...But I have short time,so lets get moving. Aly:What is it? Nathan:Im not the one youve always known Aly.Im a prince...but from the dark dimmension, and Im a soul eater...Half vampire-Half darkman. Aly:A soul eater?What's that? Nathan:That means that...If I found a balance between physical and emotional contact,I can absorb your soul and kil you. Aly:I just can't believe that Nathan. Nathan:That's why I didn't want to kiss you when I left!Because...I was in love with you,and I knew that I could kill you... Aly:(grabs his head)Im not afraid.... Nathan:Aly,please dont.... Aly:(kisses him) Nathan:(thoughts)Im gonna kill you Aly! Please! You...are...making...me...loose....control(kisses back) Aly:(Unbuttons Nathan's shirt) Nathan:(Get's Alys shirt off) Valerie:STOP!!!!
They both turn and see the girls... | |
|
| |
Supercutie12
Posts : 602 Join date : 2009-02-16 Age : 27 Location : Florida
RPG Character Info Character Name: Christina Rhinestone
| |
| |
The Emperor
Posts : 125 Join date : 2012-10-14 Age : 37 Location : Montgomery, Alabama
RPG Character Info Character Name:
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) Thu 18 Oct 2012, 06:15 | |
| Very interesting read, another great story, *sits on edge of set* Can't wait to see what comes next . | |
|
| |
Sponsored content
| Subject: Re: Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) | |
| |
|
| |
| Glomix episodes (a comic I made with my friends =D) | |
|